. . . and working on it.
. . . and working on it.
I know you can work something to death, but in the early versions, there was something missing. I knew what I wanted the tag line to be, (which I can share - "Indiana Jones's sister meets H.P. Lovecraft"), but the more I read my synopsis, the less satisfied I was with it. I had trimmed it and added to it and trimmed it down some more to meet the word count and I had a pretty good story.
But, it wasn't the story I wanted to tell. It just felt . . . flat.
Finally, today while going to Panera's with
But, after spending another six hours on it, I think I've got it. I need to brush up on the query letter again, but this sucker is about as good as it's going to get. Let it set a day, give it one last scrub on Thursday and off to the publisher.
Keep your fingers crossed.