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Rewriting

I've been reviewing the first chapter of Harbinger of Darkness with input from wishweaver. There was something about it that just never quite sat well with me. I think all the work I did for that pitch to the U.K. publisher finally brought some points home on Harbinger.

I like the story. I think it's a strong story. However, now I don't think the first chapter is as strong as it needs to be to propel the reader forward. So, before I send this puppy out again, we're going to rewrite, revise and ensure it is as good as the rest of the book.

You gotta love those "aha" moments. I guess that's what they call "experience".

*sigh*

Upward and onward.

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aqeldroma
Sep. 10th, 2007 03:54 pm (UTC)
Great icon for this post :D
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